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The Forgotten Cobra : Prologue by *RyuichiFoxe:iconRyuichiFoxe:



Prologue

Screams echoed through the halls of a seemingly abandoned research facility, each full of agonizing pain.  Doctors and scientists gathered round, watching as an experimental serum began to morph and change the test subject.  They were unaffected by the girl’s screaming, her pleas for help, and cries for an end to her torture.

It was too late, what was once an ordinary child was now the start of the ‘perfect soldier‘.  The head of the department just grinned at the fallen tears, knowing all his time and effort was going to pay off.  How she hated him, hated that smile, hated being alive just to endure this Hell.

All at once the pain seemed to fade, shocking her and the scientists.  Something told her that this wasn’t supposed to happen.  Whispers started amongst the watchers, who were obviously displeased with the result, all eyes were redirected towards the subject.  

The room grew quiet as the head scientist walked forth, kneeling beside the girl with dark hair.  He lifted her chin, forcing her to look him in the eye,” Gentlemen, this was merely phase one of the procedure, I just wanted to demonstrate that the serum has been perfected.  As we apply more and more to this young girl, she will, in time, become to the perfect soldier we’ve so struggled to create.”  The girl jerked her face from his grasp, he just chuckled and rose to his feet. “She will have powers we could only dream of possessing!  Our nation will raise above all others, and she will help forge this new path…our path, gentlemen.”

At that those gathered cheered, clapping and nodding in approval.  They patted each other on the back, congratulating one another on a job well done.

I hate you…I hate you all…

“Men, take our young soldier back to her cell, she is no longer required here until morning.” The man smiled and watched as the burly guards grabbed hold of the girl, escorting her from the room.

A certain level of fear overcame the test subject, but an odd confidence also surged through her.  One moment her hatred towards the men and woman who thought of her as only a lab rat grew, the next a man was doubled over screaming out in pure pain.  He was clutching his head, crying out as something began to scramble his every though, ripping away his memories.  The last thing the girl remembered before passing out was blood flying everywhere, and the man’s head no longer anywhere to be seen.

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A smile graced the lips of the young brunette, her ice blue eyes sparkling as her new commander approached.  That smile was the beginning of a long recovery process.  She held out her hand, greeting her boss warmly, in turn earning her an equally nice reception.

“So you’re The Forgotten, I’ve been hearing from my superiors that we’d be receiving a new recruit.” The commander smiled, pushing aside a few strands of blonde hair, and gestured for the other woman to follow to a parked vehicle. “ I’m just glad that I don’t have to teach you English, I’ve had problems with the others, to say the least.”

“I’m glad I’m not required to learn another language, ma’am.” The Forgotten clasped her hands behind her back, enjoying the fresh air and clear sky. “ Not to be rude but I was expecting someone a little more…intimidating, not a fellow female soldier.”

The blonde grinned,” I think we’re going to get along just fine, I’m The Joy, it’s a pleasure.”

“A pleasure as well ma’am.”

Joy paused mid-step, glancing back at her new comrade,” I’m already aware of your talents, but please…try not to mindlessly say your name around the other Cobras’, I don’t want to have to continuously explain who you are and why you’re there.  You do understand where I‘m coming from when I say that, right?”

The Forgotten couldn’t keep from laughing, she knew well and good where her superior was coming from,” Naturally, ma’am.”
©2006-2009 *RyuichiFoxe
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Author's Comments

(( FROM NOW ON THE FORGOTTEN COBRA SHALL BE REFERRED TO AS TFC ))

Kya~ The prologue to the story! :excited: Wasn’t sure if I’d be ready to post it so soon, but the urge to write hit me all of a sudden. XDXD Yay for double-decker bus inspiration! I can tell you that a love triangle DOES form, but it doesn’t involve The Sorrow. >_> No matter how cool and lovable he is, I adore the whole Joy/Sorrow pairing…they are just so precious together. >///< -remembering little chibi Joy/Sorrow picture- They lurve each other so much! :giggle:

The Cobra Unit is loosely based off of TCD comic. (( --PLUG PLUG-- Which, btw, you should so totally go and check out! --PLUG PLUG-- )) Why is it based off of TCD you ask? Because I’ve only watched my fiancée play MGS3, it’s not the kind of game I’d have the patience for…but one I love to watch. I don’t know the Cobras’ from the game, I only know TCD…and I’ve fallen for Inoni’s portrayal of them. ^///^ So again I tell you READ TCD, or you get no cookie from meh!

I know my writing skills…are mediocre at best, but bear with it. Believe me…having someone shout in all CAPS how badly you suck at writing, can discourage an author greatly. Which is a BIG reason why I don’t post a lot of what I write…I don’t even post on fanfiction.net anymore because of rude and inconsiderate people. I write for fun!! ^_^ Fun, fun, fun~

Metal Gear Solid 3 and the Cobra Unit is (c) to Hideo Kojima, but the Cobra personailties protrayed are loosley based from TCD.
The Forgotten is mine, no stealy! >_<

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Chapter One --> [link]
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:iconinonibird:
Ooooooooh, I'm looking forward to THIS. o.o
I've heard bits about this Forgotten business, but now it seems you have (can it be?) a STORY to go with it! :excited: Niftiness!

...And, btw, I'm flattered. ^^; This is what I get for being one of few people who's gone into at least a moderate amount of depth with the Cobra Unit in their war days. At least it's just "loosely". >_>

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Official TCD Website [link]
~Have fun. Loads of it. In a BOX. 8D
:iconryuichifoxe:
Yup, finally got around to writing the story of The Forgotten, I also intend to draw out random scenes from the story as it progresses. ^^ Let us hope that I can pull off the story til the very end. lol

:glomp: I say loosely because I didn't want to impose on TCD, or steal your depictions, despite how much I love them. :) Tis because of you that I became so interested in MGS as well, TCD has completely inspired my story. So I hopes that I don't disappoint when it actually gets started. lol Gosh...I ramble so much in the presence of greatness. >///< Forgive the long reply...XD;;

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"Yes but you’re an idiot; idiots and those that have failed anger management don’t bode well together!" ~ The Joy (TFC) --> [link]
:iconinonibird:
Hey, it's all cool and awesome that you were inspired by TCD! It means I've succeeded in creating decent/likeable interpretations of said characters, that's always good! X3 ...just don't talk about "presences of greatness". :o

Seriously, don't worry about imposing. I've already had to deal with someone completely ripping off TCD on ff.net without crediting either me or Kojima-san. x_x "Loose basing"/"inspiration" sound heavenly in comparison. x)

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Official TCD Website [link]
~Have fun. Loads of it. In a BOX. 8D
:iconryuichifoxe:
=3 Jup, the fact that so many people love TCD is also proof you've more than succeeded. lol :blushes: Yeah...sorry, I don't often actually get to talk to my art idols. Er, not that Yuu Watase could understand a word I said even if I did meet her. ^^; XD

Eya...that's not cool. >_> It's bad enough they didn't credit you but Kojima?

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"Yes but you’re an idiot; idiots and those that have failed anger management don’t bode well together!" ~ The Joy (TFC) --> [link]
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(Figgy) >.< Who ripped TCD off, do you remember the title of the story or anythng, the story probably isn't that good anyway, sorry abou that, hope I give enough credit when I do fanart ^^;.

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I don't suffer from insanity... I enjoy every moment of it.
:iconinonibird:
Ah, well, the person actually took the story down when I brought their blatant copying to their attention. ^^; No idea who it was...

Most people (including you) are fine about giving credit where it's due. Kojima created the Cobras in the first place, and I created TCD (which includes many personality traits and physical attributes of the younger Cobras). :shrug: Pretty straightforward. ^_^

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Official TCD Website [link]
~Have fun. Loads of it. In a BOX. 8D

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